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Task 2
Topic: The scale of language teaching is always a hot topic. Some people believe that small classes are better than large classes...
The scale of language teaching is always a hot topic. Some people believe that small classes are better than large classes, because students in small classes have more opportunity to engage directly with their teachers. While large classes can accommodate more students, they may not provide the same level of individualized attention as small classes.
In small classes, students have more choice to join the learning activities and interact with others and their teachers. Fewer students means that each student has more attention from the educators. For example, in English classes, students can practice their spoken English for free, which will help improve their communication skills. Therefor, many people argue that small classes are more effective for language learning due to the increased interaction and personalized attention they offer.
However, some regions lack sufficient teachers and teaching resources. In contrast, large classes can provide educational opportunities for more children, albeit at the cost of having fewer teachers per student. However, if students need to discuss, they could be divided into small groups. In this situation, they also have meaningful interactions. Thus, the number of students in a class may not be as critical as the quality of teaching and available resources.
All in all, if we have sufficient teaching resources, small classes can meet each student's needs. However, if there is a limitation on the number of teachers, big classes are alos a good choice.
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一、全局问题
问题：立场前后不一致，最后一段中个人观点表述模糊。
引导：需要明确总结立场并加强论点的深度。
二、重要问题清单
词汇资源
"therefor" → "therefore"
"alos" → "also"
任务完成度
"if we have sufficient teaching resources..."
论点未充分展开。建议："...small classes can better cater to each student's individual learning style..."
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儿童被过度溺爱的问题
Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be consequences for these children when they grow up?
高分范文
In contemporary society, the practice of indulging children by providing them with everything they desire and allowing unrestricted freedom is a growing concern for many parents. While this approach may seem beneficial in the short term by keeping children satisfied and content, it can have detrimental long-term effects on their development and well-being.
Firstly, giving children everything they ask for can hinder their ability to develop essential life skills such as patience, responsibility, and resilience. When children receive immediate gratification, they may struggle to understand the value of hard work and delayed rewards. This can lead to a sense of entitlement and an inability to cope with challenges later in life. Moreover, such children may lack self-discipline and the ability to set realistic goals, as they have not learned to work towards achieving something independently.
Encouraging children to earn rewards through effort and good behavior can foster a sense of achievement and independence.
📚 语法分析:
Encouraging children to earn rewards through effort and good behavior can foster a sense of achievement and independence.
原句：
Encouraging children to earn rewards through effort and good behavior can foster a sense of achievement and independence.
句子主干：
S = Encouraging children...
V = can foster
O = a sense of achievement...
从句分析：
[Noun Phrase]
Encouraging children to earn rewards...
→ 动名词短语作主语
短语分析：
<NP Encouraging children> / <VP can foster>
NP：名词短语，表示“鼓励孩子们”
VP：动词短语，表示“能够促进”
简明释义：
鼓励孩子通过努力和良好行为获得奖励，可以帮助他们感受到成就感和独立性。
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In contemporary society, the practice of indulging children by providing them with everything they desire and allowing unrestricted freedom is a growing concern for many parents. While this approach may seem beneficial in the short term by keeping children satisfied and content, it can have detrimental long-term effects on their development and well-being.
Firstly, giving children everything they ask for can hinder their ability to develop essential life skills such as patience, responsibility, and resilience. When children receive immediate gratification, they may struggle to understand the value of hard work and delayed rewards. This can lead to a sense of entitlement and an inability to cope with challenges later in life. Moreover, such children may lack self-discipline and the ability to set realistic goals, as they have not learned to work towards achieving something independently.
Secondly, allowing children to do whatever they want without boundaries can result in poor decision-making skills and behavioral issues. Without guidance and limits, children may not learn the importance of rules and respect for others.
单词：Immediate
词性与定义：
形容词，意为“立即的，直接的；眼前的”。
英文释义：happening or done without delay; occurring right away.
常见搭配：
- immediate effect
- immediate response
- immediate attention
雅思常见用法：
在写作和口语中，“immediate”常用于描述需要迅速处理的问题或事件。例如，在讨论某一政策的影响时，可以提到其“immediate effect”。
同义替换：
instant：强调没有时间延迟，通常用于更口语化的场景。
prompt：强调迅速且有效的反应，适合正式和非正式场合。
direct：强调某事物的直接性，可能不如“immediate”强调时间的紧迫性。
误用提醒：
不要将“immediate”与“urgent”混淆，虽然两者都涉及时间，但“urgent”更强调事情的重要性和紧迫性。
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